good

I like the idea a lot. I like that you came up with a new style of making movies. On the technical part you get a 10. But there are a few things that are not great.
Making a movie is more than putting a few guys on the screen acting. The environment was pretty cool, but the clothes of the actors dont match it. As it has already been pointed out several times, a plott would make the movie a lot better.
The timing should get checked as well. there are some parts where there are images that are too fast and end up screwing up the continuity of the movie instead of helping. The fade in/out in the middle of the movie doesnt help for the continuity, and neither does the change of music. There is a part were you overuse the black outs. If it has something to do with the corrupted pics that you mentioned, forget about this part. If it doesnt have anything to do with it you should check it out next time.
Somebody else suggested you to watch more movies with fights to think of better coreographies. I think that you've got that. Instead, I think that you should start looking into the less obvious things. Those little details that make a movie become more than good. Check out the continuity, add a story, think a little more about the costumes. Mix those things with what you have right now and I think that you will get something excellent.

meh

I dont really care about VT, but I got bored after one minute of playing this